Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, March 16, 2016

Encounter at The Waffle House






    I had to drive into the big city early this morning for some lab tests. The tests required me to be fasting, so I was pretty famished by the time it was over. A Waffle House is on the way home. I like to stop there sometimes when I'm alone and waffle and eggs sounded awesome! The place was packed! Of course, it was almost noon by then, and Austin is right in the middle of SXSW. That tends to bloat local traffic and fill up restaurants. I'm sure the businesses don't complain nearly as much as the commuters!
    I had to sit at the counter, which isn't bad at all if you are alone. You get to watch them cook your food and you can observe the choreography of multiple cooks and servers sharing the same space. After a bit a gentleman sat beside me. 
    After a couple of "pardon me's", shared condiments, and so on we began to talk. I learned that his name was Ron, and he is a chauffeur from San Antonio working the music festival. As we talked we discovered several shared interests. We had ordered the same breakfast, for instance. We liked much of the same foods. When he found out I was a writer we of course got into this discussion:
    Ron said,"Everyone tells me I should write a book."
    "I agree, you should."
    "Well, I don't have a lot of education, I left school when I was sixteen."
    "That doesn't really matter. I'm a big promoter of school education, but honestly that's only that top ten percent of the iceberg, as they say. Life education is that big ninety percent left over."
    "Well, I've done a lot. Bad childhood, varied work, a lot of experiences."
    "There you go. Start writing it down."
    "You're right. I have friends who are highly educated and writers, they've offered to help edit it."
    "Then do it. The absolute main thing is to get the story down on paper, or computer, whatever. Get it all down so it doesn't get lost. After that you can do what you want to tweak it, correct it, whatever it needs. Just get it down."
    I went on to tell him about others I've known, including my mother. I'd encouraged her for years to write her story for the rest of us. She always said she would ... someday. There was always an excuse not to do it. Finally it was too late.  I didn't grow up around her, so I only heard parts of her stories. 
    This is what I told Ron. We all have stories, whether they come out as truth or fiction, memoir or fantasy or all four at the same time. 
    So, here I am writing this. My attempt at taking my own advice.
    I went on to show Ron the Evernote app I use on my phone to take notes and organize them, clip articles from the web and so on. He downloaded it right there and said he'd use it. He has a lot of down time between riders, or waiting for people.
    We didn't share contact info, other than names, so I doubt he'll read this. However, Ron, if you're out there. Good Luck! Tell  your story. You shared enough of it to let me know it's worth telling. 
    Of course, now it's part of my story as well. Perhaps somewhere, somehow, one of my characters will discuss life with a chauffeur in a Waffle House. That's how it goes!
    Write on!

Friday, November 7, 2014

Progress Report: It's Vampire Time!

 I found this cover awhile back and it always makes me smile!


This is a study I did for my just finished play. More below!

     I was at a retreat last weekend. It was a gathering of my witchy and pagan friends over near Wimberley, Tx. Four and a half days at a lovely and private country place with no cats to feed, etc. Can you say awesome Halloween night? My lovely lady was being Kitchen Goddess and I of course volunteered to help. In the midst of visiting with a bunch of my closest friends old and new I turned it into my very own writing retreat! It was easy. The scheduling was pretty free-form except for meals. There were voluntary workshops or classes offered around Samhain/Halloween sorts of things. Since I was already hanging around the dining area a lot, and it was often pretty quiet except for conversations, I pulled out my laptop and finished off a play I've been working on.
      I used to write more plays when I was more active in theater. I've posted a couple in this blog. I still have a few ideas back-burnered. Some have been worked into current novel or short story projects. I do enjoy writing plays, but I've been trying to focus more on novels and short stories the last few years. "The Vampire's Quiche" is one that never let go of me, and it just feels like it wants to be a play. I can so "see" it playing out in my head! I think of it as a Halloween play, although it isn't, necessarily. It's been on back burner for several years and I pull it out and dust it off and play with it around this time of year. I finally decided to just finish it and let people see it.
      The story is about the Pettus family. An extended family living in one suburban house. Father works, mom likes to bake, the kids are nearly grown. Uncle is unemployed, Aunt reads Tarot and Grandpa thinks he's a vampire.
      Think "The Munsters" meets "You Can't Take It With You".
      This play is a lot of fun, and it feels wonderful to finally get the first draft finished. I hoping a few of my writing/theater friends will offer to give it a read and offer some feedback.

Friday, February 7, 2014

Parson Short Rides Again!

Many years ago when I was involved in writing mystery plays I came up with a fictional character I called Parson Short. He was mentioned in a couple of the plays as a fictional character and then made an appearance as an actual character in one play. He was intended to be both real and fictional, sort of like Ellery Queen who was the supposed writer of the series of Ellery Queen mysteries of which he was a character as well. 

I thought of the character as a sort of take off on other characters I was reading at the time. Ministerial types were hot for awhile back then. Father Brown, Sister Mary Helen, Rabbi David Small and others. Parson Short was conceived as a small time private investigator. He wasn't an actual minister, his first name was actually Parson. I gave him a stock rejoinder to questions, "Parson's the name, not the occupation!"

We had fun making up fictional books that the fictional character would have appeared in, all titles with the word "Short" in them, like "Short Stories", "Murder for Short", etc. That was from our "Reunion with Death" script, and as I said, Parson Short made an actual appearance as a living character in the script for "Play Dead."

As I was planning my current rural mystery series in progress I thought of having Parson Short be a resident of the town as a reclusive mystery author. Wheels within wheels. 

Parson Short has popped up again, though. I am taking a Creative Writing: Plotting class with Fleeta Cunningham in Bastrop, Tx currently. As the main exercise of the class we are plotting and writing a short story throughout the class. Therefore, I have resurrected Parson Short to be my protagonist! Look for the new adventure to appear here when finished!

Onward!

Thursday, November 1, 2012

That Scary Time of Year!



I've avoided it for years. It's finally time to take the plunge. Today, November 1, starts NaNoWriMo, or National Novel Writing Month. Budding or experienced authors tighten their seat belts, ready the falling oxygen masks, and pledge themselves to write a novel of 50,000 words in 30 days time. 
Yikes!
It has to be a new work, no cheating and finishing up something you've already started. I haven't finished "The Bluebottle Tree" yet, so I'm setting it aside and taking on another story in the same series. The book is tentatively named "Dark Roots". This time, Deputy Constable Pen Sadler is embroiled in a renewed family feud from generations past and a series of very new murders.
We'll see what happens.
If you've ever noticed the dark side of family reunions, you've seen the recalcitrant characters, the smouldering resentments, the old grudges that lurk beneath the surface. 
You haven't?
Well, I have. Maybe it's just my family.
Anyway, I just decided to take the plunge last night and signed up. Today has been spent clearing the decks and getting ready, so no real word count today. That means I'm already about 1,667 words behind. Sigh.
Onward!

Sunday, October 7, 2012

What Brings You To A Screeching Halt?

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Saw an old handgun advertisement on Bill Crider's excellent blog this morning. It started me thinking, as it often does. The reason will become clear in a bit.

The question is, when you're reading an otherwise good novel, hopefully lost in that world, what sort of things can eject you from that fantasy?

For me, it's firearms info. I do have some expertise in that area. I'm not an expert by any means, but I was fairly into guns for awhile in the past. I even spent a few years as a practicing and licensed Gunsmith. Some of the otherwise better authors out there can make the most basic errors concerning firearms. What are some of those?
     a. Revolvers don't eject shells, at least not automatically.
     b. Revolvers also can't be silenced very effectively.
     c. Handguns come in certain calibers, basically the diameter of the bullet. For the most part, those calibers are different from rifle calibers.
     d. Both revolvers and automatics are still pistols. 
     e. Pistols are not rifles, rifles are not shotguns, and vice versa. All are firearms, but they are not interchangeable. 

There are a lot more, but you get the idea. The most recent mistake I can think of was referring to an obvious shotgun as a 12 gauge rifle. Believe me, I was ejected from that high speed story forceably. It took a fair while to get back into it. Sometimes, I don't make the effort.

Now, I'm fairly certain that every book has the potential to piss off somebody about something. I guess the key is the readers exposure or expertise.

Are these things needlessly picky? You can decide. My personal feeling is that all books should have a truth, at some level they should educate. Sure, the story may be fiction, but when facts are stated they should indeed  be factual. You don't have to be an expert on everything, but if your plot turns on a set of facts, whether it's firearms, bullet trajectory, legalese, military terms, medicine our you name it, you as an author can always have some fact checking done by someone who IS an expert. Cultivate a few of those people, let them have a read of your opus in exchange for some acknowledgement.

The internet is always available for research. Writer's Digest has a wonderful series of books called the "HowDunit Series" each book focused on an aspect like Poisons, or Forensics.

The info is out there, use it! 

What yanks your emergency brake?

And, if you want some firearms expertise, I'm available! Cheers!

Thursday, August 9, 2012

Want More of The Bluebottle Tree?


I'd like to invite anyone who hasn't already to peruse the archives of this blog and read the first four chapters of my work in progress "The Indigo Shade of the Bluebottle Tree." It won't take long and I invite comment. 
Thanks!

Wednesday, May 30, 2012

A Memoir Quote from Anne Lamott






I came across this on Facebook or somewhere and just had to share it here. Perfect response to those worries about "What will they think if I write about them!"

In other notes. Anybody interested in the next chapter of "The Indigo Shade of the Bluebottle Tree"? I've been having some issues with it. I've about decided that first person is a better approach, especially since I seem to keep dropping into it while writing. I should have it up soon.
Thanks for reading!

Friday, April 27, 2012

R.I.P. Mrs. Brown

I got an email a couple of days ago from my first wife, Linda. She told me that our teacher, Mrs. Irlene Brown had passed away. Visitation is tonight in Georgetown at 6 p.m. I'm going, since I won't be able to make the funeral tomorrow in Liberty Hill.


The picture above is of Mrs. Brown and myself at my Junior High graduation. She was one of my two favorite teachers in all twelve years of school. She taught me English from grade 5 thru 12. (Liberty Hill had all 12 grades in one building back then.) It was Mrs. Brown who encouraged me to take part in theater and to write.


I admit that I was a mediocre student. I was a bit lazy. I did read a lot, and was able to slide along making C's or so most of the time. I like to tell people I graduated in the top 13. (My graduating class was exactly 13, so perhaps I was even in the top 10 out of that.) Mrs. Brown saw something in me and encouraged me to use the talents I had. She graded my papers with encouragement. She may not have approved of my subject choice at times, it tended toward science fiction, but she always found something positive to say to me. 


We had no drama department or drama classes in our high school. We did, however, do a Junior and a Senior play as well as participating in UIL One Act Play competition. It fell to the English teacher, Mrs. Brown, to ramrod those endeavors. Since our classes were so small, the Junior and Senior plays usually used almost the whole Junior or Senior class, sometimes some of both. She always made me feel that my efforts were appreciated, whatever I did on or back stage.


In later years I had my own plays produced, and I let Mrs. Brown know about it. She seemed proud of the fact that I was writing and acting. I don't think she ever had a chance to see one of my plays, but I enjoyed the knowledge that she knew about them.


Whatever faults you find with my writing now, they are my own faults and are in spite of the excellent teaching of Mrs. Brown. Rest in Peace, lovely lady!

Monday, March 12, 2012

The Book Closet

    Has there ever been anyone who fancied himself a writer who wasn't first a fiend for reading? I know it happens. There is always someone around who looks at what writers do and they think "I can do that."
    I'm not talking about those uninformed souls.
    When I moved to my grandparent's house at age 4, they had just finished building it. It was a two-story house with living quarters over the gas station at Seward Junction. The stairwell being more or less central in the house created some interesting closet spaces. There was an understair closet on the ground floor that was used for various camping and other equipment storage. There was also a hidden space behind it I didn't find till much later.
    It is a bit difficult to explain how it was, but the stair had a landing and switchback to the second floor. A small storage closet was built on the second floor where my grandmother kept the ironing supplies and similar things.
    At some point I discovered the best part of that closet. It had bookshelves on both sides! When my father had moved away from his parents years before he had left several of his books behind. There were several mystery novels, a few World War II adventure novels, and a wonderful set of the Book of Knowledge from about 1940. I remember it had the annual update volumes up through the late '40's. There were also other books my grandparents owned, or had been given.
    The floor of the closet was about four feet off of the floor. For a very long time it was much too high for me to get into. Not long after I began reading, I discovered the treasure trove of books within and I hounded my grandmother to let me explore them.
    I made use of a small step-ladder for several years. I moved things to one side so I could crawl up into the narrow closet, nestle myself between the shelves, and stay for hours. We found a small light made for a sewing machine that I could clamp onto a shelf. I would swing the door somewhat closed, so that it wasn't a hazard to passersby, and hibernate with my books. Not unlike Harry Potter under the stairs, I suppose, although this was my voluntary retreat!
    I always loved the smell of old books. I know now that it is the smell of the books decaying and moldering, but to my young nostrils it was fine incense. I would sit there between the shelves for hours on end, flying sorties with Dave Dawson at Guadalcanal and Dunkirk or sailing with Captains Courageous.
    I loved browsing through the Book of Knowledge. The layout was wonderful for browsers. It was quite onerous in later years to try and look anything up directly. It was necessary to utilize the index, and generally pull several volumes until you found what you wanted. However, for random browsing it held my interest very well.
    It was not unlike the news feed today in Yahoo!  or Facebook. You never really knew what you stumble over next, but it was likely to be interesting, and you could take the thread and follow it.
    For a few years that closet was my reader's world.
    In the mid '50's through the mid '60's the school in Liberty Hill had all twelve grades in one old two story brick building. It was built in 1929, the year my grandfather, W.K. Seward graduated, and torn down in 1969, a year after I graduated. For most of those years the school had no central library. Each class-room had a few bookshelves with whatever books had collected there. Many were no doubt donated by the individual teachers.
    I devoured every book possible in all of those classrooms.
    Liberty Hill had no public library. I'm not sure I knew what one was until I visited my mother and step-father in Loving, New Mexico in 1957 and she took us to a library there. I thought it was amazing! You could take books home and read them, bring them back and get more. You could browse to your heart's content, and it was free! I spent all of that visit reading those new found books.
    It wasn't until the mid '60's that I had that experience again. My father was living in Conroe, Texas, and the library was only a couple of blocks away from his house. I visited in the summer for a couple of weeks and re-discovered libraries.
    In my Junior year of High School, the school finally pulled all the books together into one central school library. I finally was able to find a few of those books that I hadn't read before, books that must have been in classrooms I wasn't in.
    I was in the school library a lot. I met my first wife in there. It was a small school, of course, everyone knew everyone, but it was in that library that we actually started talking to each other.
    Liberty Hill lost its school for a few years after I graduated. I went to college, married, moved away. I actually became a card carrying library member in the Austin Public Library, then the Round Rock Public Library. I was even a library volunteer for many years. I also have to number among my libraries the college library at Central Texas College in Killeen and the complex of libraries at University of Texas and Austin Community College. All wonderful.
    Librarians are so cool! I've been in love with one or two!
    Finally, another marriage and much mileage later I returned to Liberty Hill. I was lucky enough to become a founding member, and  then an elected Trustee of the newly formed Liberty Hill Public Library. Awesomeness! I even got to be evening librarian at LHPL for a time.
    I no longer live in Liberty Hill. I use the libraries in Bastrop, Elgin and Giddings.
    My own, much trimmed down library of books now has a home in my office trailer. It is my current version of that small book closet from my childhood. I even still have a few of those old books around me. Old wonderful friends.
    Old friends are the best friends.

Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Tools Update 2012

I've  been working on the next chapter of Bluebottle Tree. It's not quite ready yet. I admit, I'm a self diagnosed A.D.O.L.S. sufferer. 
That would be "Attention Deficit, Oh Look, Shiny!"
I heard it first from a patron out at Sherwood Forest Faire, and it seemed to fit me well!
As does the picture above, no doubt.
At any rate, I thought I would post an update on one of my earliest posts about writing tools. (April 8, 2010).
I'm still regularly using the yWriter5 program I mentioned before. It's a dandy. I'm also enjoying the Tarot procedures for plotting from Tarot for Writers, by Corinne Kenner. Good tools, both. Everything I said about all the tools in that previous post are still valid. Go back and check it out if you wish. 
Another of those, Celtx, has recently updated and it is getting better and better for all sorts of writing. I still use Celtx for writing play scripts, but it has tools for most varieties of writing now.

As you may know, I'm all about "free" tools. One I just found is Zen Writer. If you just want to sit down and write, and not bother with bells and whistles and other distractions, Zen Writer is wonderful. It is a simple, uncluttered, word processor. Zen aptly describes it. The screen is very uncluttered, with a few very restful choices for background image, and a few really soothing musical pieces to accompany. I like it a lot. In fact, I copied the songs over to my music program (Windows Media Player) and included them in my "writing" playlist. I haven't found the exact niche for the program itself in my toolbox, but I will, it's just that good.It can be easily installed to a flash drive, so it's readily available to any machine I use.

One more tool I don't think I ever mentioned is a Meetup Group. 
This one is in Austin, called "Sit Down, Shut Up, and Write!"    Check your own area for Meetups like this. It's very good. 
The premise is simple, as you can see from the link. A group of writers bring their projects and writing tools, show up at a coffee shop or other location at a specified time. They visit for half- hour or so, then at the agreed time they write for an hour solid without interruption. 
It's pretty cool to have this enforced writing time to do the work and be in company of other writers at the same time.  I went to several and enjoyed it. It's a trip into Austin for me, though, so it's not really practical if we're not going into town anyway. Ideally, of course, you can make this sort of writing date with yourself at home. It's always easier to leave home and go somewhere else. Fewer interruptions and distractions. 

Speaking of Meetups, the local Austin Writer's service company Write By Night has opened their facilities to a regular session of a similar nature.  They call the Meetup "Write Here". They offer all the benefits of working in a coffee shop but quieter surroundings and their own writing library.
I haven't tried it yet, but it sounds great! Check it out.

Okay, back to work!

Saturday, January 7, 2012

The Azure Shade of the Bluebottle Tree : Chapter One




Chapter 1

"It's them rustlers, Deputy."
Ben Culver had a missing cow.
Not the sort of crime Deputy Constable Pen Sadler thought he'd be handling when he'd gotten into law enforcement, but there you go. He spent more time keeping the electorate happy than actually solving crime. Even on a scorching July day.
Pen saw random tire tracks in the dust. They all appeared to be Ben's, but Pen put on a show of measuring them. He barely avoided letting Ben talk him into making plaster casts and convinced him finally that cedar posts really don't hold fingerprints well. Finally, Pen showed the nearsighted old gentleman that once again his fence had fallen down and his missing cow was in the next field over. Even worse, that field belonged to his brother Joseph. Ben and Joseph hadn't spoken in thirty years.
Stories varied as to the cause of the feud. It was a girl or it was livestock or it was some imagined slight. It didn't really matter, except to the brothers. Pen doubted they even knew how it started.
Ben Culver was a good sort, as curmudgeonly old bachelors went. He'd somehow missed out on the land and money of the rest of his family. Instead, he ran cattle all over Copete County on leased property. Nobody, including Ben, knew how many cattle he had. He didn't brand or tag any of them, he also never checked his fences. Everyone pretty much acknowledged that any loose cattle on the roads were probably Ben's. If there was ever an accident the cows must be someone else's.
This time the "rustled livestock" in question was quickly herded back through the fence and the rusty wire was tied back up in some sort of order. It wouldn't hold for long, but it actually looked better than most of Ben's fences.
Deputy Sadler was more than ready to leave when he heard the dispatcher's voice on the radio. It wasn't good news.
“Pen, better get over to Dolly Holt’s place. There's been a shooting.”
"I'm on my way."
Deputy Constable Penrod Sadler drove off through the dust devils.


* * *


Dolly Holt’s place fit the stereotype of an old rundown ranch. Today it was showing more activity than it had in years. Pen drove up and stopped by the yard fence. Sheriff's deputies were already there clustered around the bluebottle tree. Dozens of cobalt blue patent medicine bottles, from laxative to squat salve jars, were placed over the end of every bare branch of a dead fig tree. Not an uncommon sight, especially on the older homesteads. The mottled blue shade gave a softly clownish appearance to the body beneath the tree.
There was nothing humorous about the situation. An imposing man in life, Dub Holt was sprawled like a discarded scarecrow, a few sheriff's deputies recording the evidence of death. As president of First Fidelity, Holt had been respected. He inspired trust in his patrons, but the hole in his chest, and the blood soaked dirt around him, made it clear that he had inspired someone to much worse. Blue glass shards around him and a couple of bare limbs gave Pen a rough idea of the direction at least one shot had come.
This was as much as Pen had taken in before Buster Coleman saw him.
"Traffic detail, deputy constable."
He turned away, clearly Pen had been dismissed. Pen walked out the yard gate, the counterweight rising and falling as he passed through. Elena Delgado let her “cop-face” slip a bit, winking at him behind Buster’s back. The big boys were on the job and they enjoyed putting him in his place. Pen had once been Buster's boss. Now Pen was here for traffic detail. Traffic, on a dusty farm road and a hot July afternoon, was not a problem.
Pen ignored the snub and surveyed the place from outside the fence. It was all a bit run-down, but clean. Dub had paid Tupper Roundtree to paint the house fairly recently. It certainly didn’t look like the home of a banker’s mom. Dub’s own house was a couple of miles away on the other side of Shin Oak. Willie Nelson had one of his first picnics out there. Dub's house had acres of lawn and sprinklers. Dolly’s had a bare dirt yard like most old-timers. They still remembered having to haul water and watch out for snakes.
Dolly McAllister Holt had grown up on this farm and had intended to die here till a stroke had put her in Pilgrim’s Rest nursing home. Dub hired Tina Herrera to clean and check on the place in the meantime. According to the dispatcher, Tina had found Dub's body around noon, called it in, and here they all were.
Pen watched Elena interview an obviously shaken Tina. El was doing her usual best to put her at ease. Pen heard the melody of mixed Spanish and English. He knew Elena would fill him in later, if only to spite Buster. Pen heard a truck coming on the gravel road.
A rusty gray Ford came rattling around the corner, faded lettering reading “The Feed Store” on the driver’s door, bales of hay in the back. The truck wheezed to a stop. The white dust cloud caught up and passed before the door opened.
Pen waved. “You’re late, Faye! I thought you’d beat me here!” Faye Taylor ignored him and headed for the gate, her camera in her hand. Pen stopped her.
“Crime scene, Faye, you have to stay outside the fence.”
“C’mon, Pen, I left my long lens at home!”
“Sorry, Faye. You know the rules!”
Faye glared at him, the same way she’d glared at him since grade school. She only came to his shoulder, a weathered wildcat, looking exactly as ancient as she had when Pen was about ten.
Faye and Elmo Taylor ran The Feed Store. Faye was also on the City Council and sometime reporter for the Shin Oak Stump, the “other” weekly paper. Shin Oak Ridge is a small town. The active people have a lot of horseshoes on the anvil.
Faye fussed and took pictures near the fence. Pen heard gravel crunch again and turned to see Anna Patton’s florist van pull up. Pen waved her over toward Faye. Anna often covered stories for the Shin Oak Guardian since she was usually out making deliveries anyway. She always carried her camera along. Pen kept an eye on the two of them to make sure they didn’t start flinging cow patties at each other. For the moment they ignored each other after Faye’s envious look at Anna’s telephoto lens. 
Pen left Shin Oak’s own media circus do their thing. He moved around and visually lined up the body and the broken bottles. Looking beyond, Pen could see that the bullets could have come from the dam of the stock tank, about seventy yards away. It was a shot any of the numerous deer hunters in the area could have made. Pen started to say something to the deputies, but stopped himself. Buster had made it plain that he didn’t want his advice.
Robbie Metcalfe came out to his van and stopped to chat. Robbie was young but he had been one of Shin Oak's first EMT's after the volunteer fire department formed. He really wasn't too concerned about Buster's attitude.
"Terrible about old Dub. Looks like a bullet through the heart."
Pen mentioned what he had noticed about probable direction. When Robbie went back into the yard he passed a private word to Elena. She spoke to Buster. Pen figured she'd find a way to let Buster think it was his own idea. Buster tolerated a smart hispanic woman only slightly more than he did a deputy constable. He would let her check it out, though, if it saved him some effort. Finally Justice of the Peace Sarah Beth Adams got there to declare Dub legally dead and things got busier. She conferred with Robbie and Buster. Pen knew she would keep him in the loop regardless.
 The sheriff's deputies had pretty much recorded everything by the time the JP arrived. Other than Faye and Anna the only traffic to control was the county cars and the ambulance leaving the scene. Buster gave a short statement to the reporters and sent them away. Pen had to stay with "traffic control" until everyone had left. That didn't take much longer.
Pen stepped past the yellow tape and looked around the yard before he left. Nothing he hadn't already seen. The packed earth barely even showed anyone had passed. Blue glass shards and Dub's bloodstain were the only evidence anything had happened. When the rains came the blood would be gone.
Maybe flowers would grow.
Pen took a walk over to the nearly dry stock tank. Some of the dried grass was pushed down, but feral pigs were everywhere, so that may not have meant anything. He could clearly see the bottle tree from there, whatever that was worth.
For now, it was the sheriff's case.
Pen would see what happened. Sarah Beth didn't like him stepping on anyone's toes if it wasn't necessary. It wasn't in his job description.
Besides, Pen had stayed long enough, the radio was squawking.
Pen had other fish to fry, as his old Uncle Hub used to say.




Saturday, October 22, 2011

The Blue Bottle Tree

It's a "blue bottle tree". It's my blue bottle tree. I've been seeking images of bona fide blue bottle trees to go with a mystery story I've been working on. It has been so far impossible to find the "right" tree image. I may have to resort to having someone paint one from my memory.


You say, "what's wrong with your own blue bottle tree?" "What makes a 'bona fide' blue bottle tree?"


Good questions, those, and the same ones I've been trying to explain to my partner, Cat Dancing.
It's all a matter of attitude, and of course, my memory. The trees I remember from my youth are fairly different. And, since my story is set pretty much in that background, then it becomes important.


What are the elements of a "true" blue bottle tree? 
Bare soil, a bushy but dead fig tree, and lots of Milk of Magnesia bottles. Actually any blue bottles that were available. 
No, I said no, wine bottles. 
See the above picture. Almost all wine and mead bottles. 

I did risk three of my precious antique Milk of Magnesia bottles for the picture. 

At the time and place of my youth, most of the old timers took Milk of Magnesia and other OTC preparations. Cat says it's a statement of bad diet, and I suppose it is. That's a whole other subject. 
Hardly anyone would display a wine bottle in the yard. It just wasn't done.
We were in a dry county, to start with, and deeeeeeeeeep in the bible belt.


Few of the average people had grass in the yard, other than scraggly patches of bermuda grass or johnson grass. Enough people were worried about snakes, anyway, that they preferred bare dirt.


And, dead fig trees were common.













I was able to find one picture online of a Milk of Magnesia blue bottle tree. Getting closer!







True, a blue bottle tree is a blue bottle tree. But for the scene I'm setting, and the space I'm invoking, it needs to be right.


I suspect that all the original M.O.M. bottles were scavenged from the existing trees back in the '80's and sold to antique shops. That's why they are so rare today. 


One way or another I'll get that picture!

Friday, September 16, 2011

To The Far Blue Mountains!

I don't repost others' blogs often, but Bish really nailed it in this one. I've been a long time fan of Louis L'Amour and I adore the Sackett series. I've read most of them multiple times. If I can ever tell a story as well as L'Amour, I'll have certainly arrived!




 

  BISH'S BEAT: FORGOTTEN BOOKS: TO THE FAR BLUE MOUNTAINS!: FORGOTTEN BOOKS: TO THE FAR BLUE MOUNTAINS! LOUIS L’AMOUR About twenty years ago, I read my way through two dozen or more Louis L’Amour ...